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Coming Undone is a story written by [[Roumonte Emi]]. It ran in [[Issue | Coming Undone is a story written by [[Roumonte Emi]]. It ran in [[Issue 28]] at http://s2b2.livejournal.com/163308.html, and is mirrored at http://www.shousetsubangbang.com/mirror/coming-undone/. | ||
== Summary == | |||
From http://inceptanon2.livejournal.com/2986.html?thread=13058218: "a story about a man who uses his time-traveling ability to sleep with people multiple ways in one night and then reset it so they never did at all". | |||
== Author's Notes == | |||
From http://mchandler.org/ssbb/undone.html: | |||
Something of an unusual SSB*B submission from me, this time around. Somehow over the years I have become accustomed to writing very long, plot-heavy stories that bash up hard against one rule or another, requiring me to write to the editors and beg for forgiveness; this time around I specifically set out to write an SSB*B story as close to the original spirit of the webzine as possible: short, porny as hell, and largely plotless. It also came out skeevy and psychologically disturbing. Go, me! | |||
Warnings: porn, porn, porn, porn, and profanity—also creepy and unpleasant things are being done by a creepy and unpleasant person | |||
That... was pretty nasty, all in all! I made a specific effort to pare out as much euphemism as I could and go straight for the down-and-dirty instead, because that seemed like the most Damon-like approach. I hesitate to call this a 'masculine' approach to porn, but the masculine sound was kind of what I'd wanted to produce. I indulged my predilection for euphemism and language-fuckery outside of the porn, and that was good enough for me. | |||
Damon is an amoral bastard—I wouldn't go so far as to say evil, but I could probably make an argument for that, too—and it pleased me to not redeem him at all. | |||
== External Reviews == | |||
*[https://www.pinboard.in/u:itrasbiel/b:26c318886102 pinboard.in]: "WELL THIS WAS CREEPY" | |||
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Latest revision as of 19:36, 22 November 2014
Coming Undone is a story written by Roumonte Emi. It ran in Issue 28 at http://s2b2.livejournal.com/163308.html, and is mirrored at http://www.shousetsubangbang.com/mirror/coming-undone/.
Summary
From http://inceptanon2.livejournal.com/2986.html?thread=13058218: "a story about a man who uses his time-traveling ability to sleep with people multiple ways in one night and then reset it so they never did at all".
Author's Notes
From http://mchandler.org/ssbb/undone.html:
Something of an unusual SSB*B submission from me, this time around. Somehow over the years I have become accustomed to writing very long, plot-heavy stories that bash up hard against one rule or another, requiring me to write to the editors and beg for forgiveness; this time around I specifically set out to write an SSB*B story as close to the original spirit of the webzine as possible: short, porny as hell, and largely plotless. It also came out skeevy and psychologically disturbing. Go, me!
Warnings: porn, porn, porn, porn, and profanity—also creepy and unpleasant things are being done by a creepy and unpleasant person
That... was pretty nasty, all in all! I made a specific effort to pare out as much euphemism as I could and go straight for the down-and-dirty instead, because that seemed like the most Damon-like approach. I hesitate to call this a 'masculine' approach to porn, but the masculine sound was kind of what I'd wanted to produce. I indulged my predilection for euphemism and language-fuckery outside of the porn, and that was good enough for me.
Damon is an amoral bastard—I wouldn't go so far as to say evil, but I could probably make an argument for that, too—and it pleased me to not redeem him at all.
External Reviews
- pinboard.in: "WELL THIS WAS CREEPY"
